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for If You Would Only See

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Your writing is fabulous!
person Jen618
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I like how you set up the friendship between D/H and independant hermione. I'm gonna keep reading but wanted to drop in a quick comment.
person Jen618
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the peep-show was hilarious.
person Jen618
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he he... delightful. Loved the dream sequence.
person Jen618
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a bit overdone with the sugar -- my dentist will not approve!! -- but the meeting went well, all things considered.
person Carine
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story .It was very funny but sometimes so sad it made me cry.As the luxemburgish people say"I have build very close to the water."I don't even know if there exists a similar expression in english.Just can't wait to read another story.LOL Sureves Epans
person Jen618
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well done. They mystery was particularly interesting. All those children?! funny.
person Apryl
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If Skele-Gro can re-grow bones, why not a potion to re-grow damaged body parts? By the way, this chapter left me in tears.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot. keep going!!!
person Muffy
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*smiles*

Beautifully done. Some very powerful and emotional moments. Enjoyable read. Thanks.