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for If You Would Only See

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD! That was so competely awesome! I love it, I love it, I love it.
Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i absolutely love the description of the children and the sorting. that was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! bravo lol
person mlui
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! All those kids...lol.
person marcia
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That ending had me laughing. I loved it.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How can you not grow tired of me saying this about all your stories. It is amazing great. I think you are very talented and am about to read the other one that I haven't read yet and Hermione should really try to see ifhe can carry the babies this time!!!! Luv SIn!!!!!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story and yes I would love to see more smut, so, which story will have the smut, I am interested to find it amongst the many you've written. By the way, I would love to get the film John Gissing also. I have called every video store in three towns around here including Ottawa.

If it is possible to let me know how I can get it I would appreciate it. Perhaps let me know how to get a hold of your friend and I can deal with her. Thanks and keep writing.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Never mind found the link to order it direct. Thanks anyway.
person Utopia
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I'd let the typos go - but this is one that I won't ignore:
person Utopia
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sing songs* Snape made a mess of his sheets. Snape made a mess of his sheeeeee-eeeeeets! lol!

That was quite a nice plot device, actually; Snape is male and human.

Snape made a mess of his sheeeeee-eeeeeeets!