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for If You Would Only See

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm we have an interesting relationship with hermione and severus developing they both have an attraction to each other.. even though hermione has no idea who he is
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that dream was hot... nice job...
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this good... how funny i love this fic... severus is such a peeping tom but it is hot when he does it and poor draco... i wish he would find happiness
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is wow
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah draco is healing and hermione is heartbroken... come on severus!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ih wow now that was an awesome chap so romantic and heartbreaking i teared up at the end... 'let it chase away the darkness' omg i knew something big had to happen to bring severus out of hibernation he was a hero again
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg what a chap ohhh poor draco... and i am so glad that severus received a welcome response
person smmz79
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg they have a house full great fic very sweet loved it
person neelix
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am catching up on your back catalogue! I loved this, very sweet story.

Did you find John Gissing in the end? They sell it st Amazon now if you've had no luck.
person Darkless
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one started out so sad. Severus, suffering and alone. That's no way for anyone to live.

The Dark Trio....oh, you are so deviously twisted. I love it!