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Great story so far! aww he comes back to help her! I knew she never really married ron!! ::Glares angrily at Ron and fiddles with my own little Potter world::

Very very nice start so far. I like the touch with Dr. Granger helping to save his life. I am definitely looking forward to the next installment.

RE: chapter 1

I love the details of the teeth with the potions inside--very clever! I also like the image that you created regarding the photo of Hermione ...(kind of a wistful yearning thing going on there) showing us that he has a heart/emotions too.

I eagerly await further installments of this piece! =D

Please don't get discouraged by people's neglecting to review. Chances are that they figure that someone else will do it, so why bother, only to bitch and moan when they see the story abandoned due to "lack of interest".

TTFN (Ta Ta For Now)
;-D

I liked it! I wonder if you are going to keep to cannon? I hope not, I have to admit that the thougth of Hermione married to Ron for at least 19 years before you pair her with Severus is not an idea I enjoy. In my eyes that was one of the downfalls of DH, since I absolutely hate the Hermione/Ron pairing, I can't in my wildest dream belive that to be a happy combination. I hope you will skip the epilogue of DH, pretend it was never written and continue the story from rigth after the war. (If you let us have the punishment of Umbrigde mentioned in a sentence I would probably enjoy that too, I missed that in DH, the knowlegde on how those who went along with Voldemort and his ideas were punished). I also hope you will let us now more about Sybil's prophecy:-)) Update again soon!!!

seems interesting so far

I want more. It's a great start and I can't wait to see the next chapter

this is a great start! update soon`

oooooh, interesting setup. my only quibble is using dr. granger to supply the dental work get severus out of the sticky mess JKR finished him off with. if hermione dont know snape is alive, then having her parent supply the means to save snapes life doesnt make much sense. if hermione knows snape is alive, it works, but i admit i like the sense of mystery the story would take on if hermione has no idea snape survived. keep writing, i look forward to seeing more additions to this.

Hi,Sheedy,
this first chapter just sounds so interesting and wonderful.I hope that in some later chapter you will tell us more about the prophecy Trelawny made about Severus and Hermione.I just cannot wait for the next chapters.LOL Sureves Epans

Lovely start. More Please!