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That's awesome. I definitely want to read that.

Ron Weasely as Jane Bennett, calm and non-judgmental? (I picture him more as Kitty - envious of her sisters but not really taking any action to improve her lot). Tom Riddle as Mr. Collins, toadying sycophant? He might make a better Mr. Wickham. And I have seen Snape as Lady Catherine de Bourgh and that always seemed perfect casting, since he sneers down at Harry so much. Hermione has always seemed too spirited to be Charlotte Lucas. Percy as Mary Bennett is perfect, though. If you wanted to get all the Weasleys into your story - don't forget Charlie. Maybe he could be Mr. Darcy's officer friend (cousin?). Instead of making Ginny an extra Bennett, why not give her one of the other female roles that you have listed as original characters? By the way - it should be Norris, not Noriss. And please don't think by my criticism that I don't like the original idea - Harry as Eliza Bennett has been a favourite for a while.

oh this story is going to prove to be quite cute!! Do continue with it dear!!