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so, I realize it's been a few years but I was wondering if you ever picked up this story again? I read the first bit and found it really interesting and I definitely haven't seen another story like it. I think you had something good going with it. If you simply lost interest, have you considered putting it up for adoption? Just a random idea, since it's a shame to leave it with just a taste of what was to come. Anyways, just thought I'd put in my measly two cents :D

um.........okay, first sorry for telling you about that there's already a story that is done this way.
All I wanted to do is just....well, write better. Didn't meant to threaten you to dump the story.
Write what ever it is up to your standard, do what you want, don't let other ppl stop you from doing it.

pleas. don't make Fred & George into those annoying creatures (girls), and please keep all the characters the same, I'm okay with changing Harry into a girl, but the rest..............................-_-|||
There's a author that already did this, it's called "Facade" http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/malfoi/facade.html

Hello Mrs. Knight!

I really like your writing style so I think you should continue your story! Just because someone else has already done it doesn't mean that you can't. I mean, look at how many DracoHarry Veela stories there are! I mean WHOA! For all you know, yours could even be better! Don't give up so easily, BELIEVE IN YOURSELF! Even though you've only done one chapter really, I was immediately attached. You should try to continue and just see the response from the readers, then make your decision. You seem like a wonderful writer so don't give up!

Sincerely,
VerdantFox

P.S.-You don't have to listen to me or continue the story if you don't want to. I was just trying to give you some encouragement! Ja ne! ^_^

Please continue your wonderful Harry Potter version of Pride & Prejudice. It is done so well and I love your version far better than any I have read. I really, really, really love the character placing. As a reader of the book and having watched the movie versions, I must say you have done a beautiful job.

Pride and prejudice is my favourite book, and I am a little disappointed that no one has written about it yet. The story you mentioned was only started and it has not been updated in three years.

I love this! Can't wait for chapter 2!

Very good start. And I think a lemon would be a good ending. Also maybe a flash back sequence when tom riddle gets. Draco's "sister" impregnated might be good.

The other story isn't a thing like yours.

Can you fix the formatting? Everything squished together like that makes it hard to read.