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for Her Secret Admirer

by lilbitbord

person Persy
schedule January 18, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Precious and sweet....

person Persy
schedule September 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

 

So sweet and romantic!!!!!

schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very enjoyable O/S, thank you for sharing.
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person luvhp
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mysterious, sexy,funny, hot and steamy! Perfect blend for a birthday treat!
person Djenn88
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Simply perfection!!! You are a true artist!
person Eerie Iri from Fanfiction.Net
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE you! You put two of my favorite pairings in one story( even if Draco/Harry was only mentioned). You totally rock!^____________________________________________________________________________________________^
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 (one shot) : I
person Lil
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really sophomoric in a lot of ways (particularly the way everything moves at the speed of light-- Hermione being totally okay with the fact that a snarky bastard she used to loathe asked her out on a date, a single kiss turning into an "Oh, I love you, let's have sex!"-- it doesn't really work like that). There are a lot of details you simply graze over that could make this story a lot better (for instance, Draco's transition to the other side, and Snape's story after the war).

It has it's moments, but you need a good beta and a few painfully honest test-readers to read first :).

(Sorry, I don't mean to be rude, and I'm sure as coming off as such, but a lot of people here sugarcoat things that need work, and I just want you to know my actual opinions!)