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I have never read a fanfic quite like that one. I'd like to read more, especially when they get older and go to Hogwarts.

OOO could you have not made ginny be taken in such a manner. it's so wrong. It would have been so much better if she taken gentlely of rough is okay if it was not in such a brute manner. also i hope the next one comes out soon. I'd really like to se more of little harry or ron.

OK, I read the warnings and everything and I went into this expecting it to be exactly what I found, however I didn't quite expect to be as affected as what I actually was. I almost threw up after reading the Breaking Ginny chapter, I didn't quite expect Arthur to be THAT horrible, it just screams rape, and that the wizarding world is so corrupted, and that they're all trained from a young age that this is the way things are, you can't change that you're a woman and you're going to be used and abused the rest of your life. And that they are so brainwashed because of this, and that they think it's OK, and the whole society turns out like that so it's accepted as OK, and they continue to teach their children this, against their natural thoughts and feelings, which are then conditioned into how society wants them to feel. If you get them from a young age, they will always think that this is right, this is how things are, when they didn't have to in the first place. That's some seriously fucked up society, and I know you probably didn't mean to create it with this little PWP, but I've been studying dystopian literature currently (things like '1984' by George Orwell(which, btw, is where the origins of the show "Big Brother" came from), "Brace New World" by Aldous Huxley, "The Handmaiden's Tale" Margret Atwood) and it's made me bring all these ideas of authority and control forward in my mind as I read this, it's a way of conditioning the society from a young age, to continue on the corruption.

I'm sorry, I know this is just a little bit of smut, something not really meaning anything, but this is the reaction I had, and I felt like I had to share it, to write it all down. It's not a bad story really, I mean I'm sure it will develop more and more, and personally, I went into it thinking, great, I've been looking for something like this recently, and to the warning I was like yeah yeah, I've seen it all before, nothing can scare me, but it shocked even me. I think it was because it was het, I'm used to reading these kinds of things in a slash context, and that doesn't affect me all that much, but the things that were something to the effect of "Please Daddy," and "Take it you whore," really unsettled me. It might just be me more so than the actual story, being as issues like these are very touchy issues for me, although I continue to read it in fanfiction.

Do not take this review as a flame! I only meant to tell you my thoughts, which is what a review is meant for yeah? You're a promising author, and the fact that you could bring up all these thoughts and emotions in me is actually a real compliment to your writing, not many people have been able to do that. Getting your readers thinking and feeling is a good thing, even if the thoughts aren't the best, and it creates outcry in one such as me. So take it to heed, and I hope to see more soon enough.

If you feel the need to reply to me personally about this, I can be contacted at phoenix_fire_cat@yahoo.com

~gorgeousbowneyes

Fine but i myself is not into rape to small kids. there are of course somethings that some likes and somethings they don't like. but i will wait for the next chapter, maybe the new one will be more in my taste.

I'd never condone doing it in real life, but damn, it's fun to read when it's late at night and nobody's watching...

i liked the first to chapters the most , the weasly were not loving or exiting enough
keep writing and post soon
bye bye

Oh my gosh sooo hot need cold shower. Must have more!!!!!!!!!

I think you write very well and I can't wait till the next chapter.

good chapter

Interesting chapter. Are you trying to say that Harry & Ginny will be together and whores?

Oh and as this story is about Harry, maybe more chapters about Harry? and Will Harry always get f...ed or will h e f..k too?

Just wondering