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I wouldn't know where to start writing about economics and wealth creation, so I thought you did a great job here. I love Voldemort's scheme to drain the money away from the Muggles.

I really liked the image of Daphne using her wand as a hairdryer as well; made me chuckle.

I did read the conversation between Snape and Voldemort; not sure why I didn't review it - I guess I was having a brainstorm that day. It happens too often.

Anyway, still enjoying this a lot - it is your meisterwerk, I think.

Interesting. Lets you in on the inner workings of the politics and economic standing of the group. Well done.

Leave it to Snape to break up a party - he did it so well! I loved that image of the giant pyramid of shot glasses crashing to the ground with the neon-coloured wine spilling everywhere - and then the poor house elves pricking their hands in their haste to clear up.

There is something new and startling with every chapter of this; I can't imagine what you could come up with next! Obviously Voldemort is getting a bit stressed and that can't be good news!

nice chapter...it seems to me that Voldemort has some trouble controling his followers. Update soon!

OOOHHHHH!
Voldy saw Bella in her element...
*squeels*
for some reason during this entire chapter i was singing Sex and Candy by Marcy's Playground in my head.
hahaha

Odd Odd Odd Odd! If even voldemort thought it disgusting then WTF?! Poor Draco forced to be on a side in which he holds no respect or allegiance for. Voldemort should have crucioed them all! For being disgusting worthless servants! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Excellent chapter by the way! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh wow, it didn't occur to me that Voldemort would disapprove of the orgy - I love that angle! I think it's much more ic than if he joined in himself. And I like the inner conflict Draco is having (even if he does want to get with Pansy).

Very decadent, Roman-style orgy with extra magic - those Death Eaters don't hold back, do they?

Voldemort's plans to ensure racial purity of wizards and witches are truly evil - a lot of thought must have gone into them; as ever I applaud your attention to detail. Good conversation between Voldemort and Ollivander; I felt a bit sick on Ollivander's behalf at having to drink stagnant water. I can imagine properly now what the wizarding world would have been like under Voldemort - this gives me ideas for my own fic, so thank you!

Bring on the sexual craziness!

voldemort's an evil bastard! Poor Ollivander....can't wait for the next chapter!