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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an intense scene - it must take a lot out of you, actually, to write such consistent high drama, so I'm not surprised you're a bit drained. I feel sorry for both Lucius and Narcissa in this, yet at the same time they can be their own worst enemies.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can understand that Lucius feels completely emasculated and driven over the edge by the events of the past few weeks, but all the same, poor Narcissa! She'll be lucky to come out of this with her sanity intact. I bet she's pretty furious with Lucius for one reason or another as well - I imagine their fight will be pretty bitter, though canon reveals that eventually their suffering brings them closer together.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Narcissa....man they just cannot get a break can they? Please update soon!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's about as extreme as I've ever read - the snake thing was really creative, though it was pretty gross with its excreting the remains of Rufus Scrimgeour. The fire around the bed was very dramatic too. Also, yes, it makes sense that Voldemort would want to sterilise his potential rivals. I think Narcissa's unconsciousness was a blessed relief - this is going to traumatise her and Lucius for life, I should think.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was just extremely disturbing...Voldemort is a sick bastard. Thanks for updating though.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a time to call out the wrong name! Well, this is wild. And now she's broken Lucius' nose; I'd say it couldn't get much worse for Narcissa but I bet it can.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was so disturbing...but I couldnt stop reading it! I was like in a trance! *shudders* Voldemort is one sick bastard.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Voldemort is one sick bastard O.o
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a story where Voldemort is into toe-sucking - very original! And I guess he doesn't use lubricant - ouch!
I was interested by the pleasure he got from handling Narcissa's silk robe - he obviously has a sensual side; I wonder how much we'll see of it through the cruelty and domination? I liked your description of his body, so unearthly-looking but powerful. And of course, he'd have to be well-endowed - he is the heir of Slytherin! Lol.
I was interested by the pleasure he got from handling Narcissa's silk robe - he obviously has a sensual side; I wonder how much we'll see of it through the cruelty and domination? I liked your description of his body, so unearthly-looking but powerful. And of course, he'd have to be well-endowed - he is the heir of Slytherin! Lol.
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter; a wonderful build-up of tension and I think you get into Narcissa's head really convincingly. I like the spirit in the washbowl and the appearance of the Banshee. And now she's had a scare over Lucius and thinks Voldemort is going to kill her - wouldn't put me in the mood for sex, must admit!
I guess we're ready for the evil ravishment of Narcissa now then!
I guess we're ready for the evil ravishment of Narcissa now then!