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amazing. i made it my goal to finish the story today and i did it! *pats self on back*
this was the most twisted/erotic/sexual/horrific thing i have ever read...but with the greatest air of brilliance!! voldemort seemed way in chracter as he dominated Narcissa. I snickered honestly when she had to sit on lucius's face...it was funny...although i expected him [lucius] to spank her in that chapter...same goes w/ voldemort/bella i was for sure.
laughed my arse off about the whole 'snape caning draco' thing...brat deserved it if you ask me!
LOVED IT
~slytherin_mistress

Yeah you're right I am pretty ambivalent about those things.... *chuckles guiltily* Sometimes I find myself laughing at such nasty things, at other times recoiling in horror.What is wrong with me lol . . . That wasn't necessarily phrased as a question.... XD

I'm not putting out any new fics for a while, as I'm going to be be working on my OC fic until it's finished. I have alot of planning for it, and many chapters or parts thereof I have prewritten. I'm doing a bit of revising myself, as I didn't really build my OC very well and I did write Dumbledore OOC so I had to tweak things quite a bit . . . But I'm not holding back so it's going to get ugly . . . to say the least.

'New Moon of Darkness' you know, I really do not recall this chapter....this actually caught me by surprise since I found myself loving that excerpt of a poem you instilled by Sylvia Plath.
I wish you would continue this story, as I felt a bit excited when I saw it back up in the 'General' forum and thought perhaps you were going to continue it.... Unfortunately I was mistaken it would seem. Oh well .

Thanks for all your reviews. I am glad you read it all.

I actually did use a Latin translator online. There were so many different verb forms and alternatives with each word. I put in each word one at a time because when I translated a whole phrase back (Latin to English) it usually said the wrong thing. So I went word by word. I am sure it

Oh goody an unexpected plot twist. This makes it much more intriuging... *rubs hands together gleefully* Lucius drinking the potion in Narcissa's stead. Too bad for Voldemort, looks like he won't get his
>D
"corpse action" after all, *as Bellatrix doesn't realize she'd be doing him a favor by drugging Narcissa with dreamless sleep*.

O.o He . . . slurped her menses.. how lovely. Well, if you really wanted to base this off Nazi Germany and be more accurate, *assuming that voldemort is based off of Hitler* then you should have given him a fecal matter fetish since Hitler was rumoured to have one >DDD. THe PWP is good, I think I can understand what you mean about how difficult it is to write because I'm one of those people who have alot of trouble writing it as well. :P
Voldemort seems to gravitate towards inserting things into anuses, which is almost like a shit fetish but not quite. *shudders* I can't believe all the people in this fic that rim each other >P... you would think that they would be concerned with cleanslyness at least and thoroughly scorgify or whtever the area they will be inserting their tongues... Ech... lol. Actually, the toe fetish wasn't really that bad, in comparence with the child rape.... I actually enjoyed these PWP chapters profusely. Making her sit on Lucius's face was a tad extreme, but then again, I was actually anticipating Voldemort to raise Lucius up in the air with his wand and humiliate him in some rather inventive yet revolting manner as only he can. So I'm wondering, since Nagini is joining them in the room, perhaps there will be a part for Naginin in the chapters ahead?

Yeah that was pretty awful. I didn't consider the snake screwing them both at once.... *laughs in horror*
Well, I have to say your story has inspired me to make mine more foul and loathsome than previously thought of, since for the longest time I haven't progressed much due to the fact that I've been torn between two options, extremely revolting or just more censored. So I'm contemplating, the more hideous, the better, but not stretching it. I am almost sad that your fic is coming to an end for me ... /:(

Ooh, that has got to smart. >.~
Lucius's reacton doesn't really surprise me that much, he is rather immature at times. If he never figures out that Voldemort made him sterile (( not in your fic but in speculative theory - hypothetically )) then he is an absolute moron... Hmm.. angry sex is rather amusing... ah but for poor little Narcissa? Not so much.

That was the best chapter of the entire fic as far as I'm concerned. I really liked how you twisted everything up to a great close, and how Bellatrix realized she would never get the true intimacy she desired with him. really stange about how your ending was the complete antonym to the HP ending. I didn't really feel any sympathy for the malfoy couple at the end, Narcissa is something of an enabeler and Lucius well... he's a prat. But for some reason I did feel slightly bad in a way for Voldemort, when you wrote it was always him alone. The only reason I felt sorry for him was because he will never know the value of friendship or anything that is more substantial and wonderful than power. I guess only in my demented mind do I see him as a sort of ironically tragic character, ironic since he is meant to be the antagonist yet I can find him tradgic. But thats only when you put aside every act of vile cruelty he has ever committed and just see him as someone who is oblivious to things of the heart that he cannot, will never, comprehend. It's funny, for all his power and intelligence, as supposedly he is supposed to be a genius, he is emotionally retarded. In that regard, I consider him to be an imbecile, for if you posess intelligence what good is it if you have no one to share it with? What good is power when you have no friends? what is the use if you must always be completely and utterly alone?
Great fic, sad ending.

Yes of course it is blatantly obvious, its merely that since Rowling loosely based them on Nazi Germany to begin with that I merely felt you were keeping them canon. I guess comparing them in my mind to Nazi Germany is a bit unsavory and there are times when I just would rather see them in a more humane light, although this is not logically plausible lol I suppose it is merely the philanthropist in me.
Actually, I did read your fic with Umbridge spanking the minister... which in my opinion is in the same family so basically the same thing as caning. I'd have to say so far I do like your story for it's realism, but not really for the sexual... scenes >.o as they are rather unsettling to say the least.. If I was Voldemort I would not let my followers carry about in such a manner ah but then I guess it wouldn't be the same would it?

The Latin is a nice touch to the ceremony... but you do know you could just use an automatic translator online instead of hours manually translating it yourself don't you?