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for The Pureblood Coup

by PensievePerson

schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh....man he's evil. How does he do that? He always knows what other people are thinking...*shudders* Nice update!

Anticipating the next chapter,

*Lilith*
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, you're absolutely right - it's impossible to imagine Voldemort eating. I guess perhaps he takes an intravenous potion or something.

Lovely scene setting - everyone gathered for the grand celebration, but hardly any of them feel like celebrating (especially Scrimgeour). I can't wait to see what Voldemort has in store for the rest of the evening. And ouch! at getting 1981 vintage champagne - how tactless!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
21: That's a lot of strain on a marriage! I like the way you dwell on the dynamic between the Malfoys and Bellatrix - everyone is just so bored with her, lol. This must be really hard on Narcissa; she's regretting the whole thing quite badly, I feel.

Well, on to the next chapter!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
22: Oh, this is lovely! This is where you shine, I think, with your attention to detail. The Graphorn leather and the ruffle that reminds V. of a beard and gives him a sense of outdoing Dumbledore - so inventive! And you just know Lucius would be the most fashionable man in the wizarding world. No way he could attend the party without his pimp cane! Yay!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
23: Oh my God, I love that Umbridge is crashing the party - how funny. I bet even Voldemort finds her incredibly annoying.

You're on a roll here, PP; I'm looking forward the rest.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love how fast you update! and Umbridge! She's evil! there should be a law against wearing that much pink! Hahahaha! Can't wait for the party scene!! *parties like a rockstar* WOOT!

Awaiting another awesome chap,

*Lilith*
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.S. You are most welcome! I have just found your story and already you got me hooked! Much love babe! *KISS*

*Lilith*
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius...so confused. I can't wait till we get to the party! Please update soon!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lilith,...thank-for your reviews and for continuing. Lucius is in a terrible state.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! Pimp cane! WOOT WOOT! Thanks for updating hun!