rate_review Reviews

Everybody is entitled to there opinion, I can understand why you don't like it. I am planning on re-writing, basically the whole story one do. I find the writing is awful, but I think the plot is brilliant. The story itself is great.

I've been reading some of that story while at work.
I'll have to try and get some time alone at home to read it instead because sitting in the office with a hard-on is not a good look!
I am really liking the character of Bella..... who knew i'd be turned on by a sadistic witch?

I'm trying to have a read through today but not getting much time or privacy. It will be easier when I'm away from home over the next few days. As I said in a much earlier mail, I'm married and my wife knows nothing about my interest in things like this. The bizzar sex i mean. She knows i'm a HP fan.

I found it very exciting to read about Ginny in a sexual way also in one of your other stories. So young and inoccent and i am found it very exciting reading about Riddle exploring her sexuality. I'm going to see if you have more about her afterwards.

Reading the pureblood coup... Reading the pureblood coup... On chapter 27, it's quite late but i want to keep on reading for an hour or two yet.
I'm really enjoying it!
I am going to be very honest and tell you that i found the near rape of Ginny very exciting. I'm glad it was stopped but the near miss excited me a lot.
I can't wait to read about what Voldermort does with Narcissa later! I hope Bella is involved somehow even though she will be jealous of the attention given by her master to her sister.

I've read erotic fiction before but i am finding this more exciting, the reason is because i've seen your video and what a pretty young girl the author is! That makes your stories SO much more exciting!

I'll give a review on the site as well but i won't say how much i am enjoying the twisted sex, i'll keep that between you and me

I actually think this was the worst story ever. the only reason i finished is is because i had to.

Just added a new scene with Minister Scrimgeour in "Brain Damage 4" at the beginning....2,000 new words! I am going to try to come back soon and add some more scenes. I have at least 12 scenes in my head that I will be adding!

Oh and I hope somebody else, who discovers this story and likes it....can come and review! It might be a little egotistical, but I can't help wishing in the future that this could be a movie....Maybe in a hundred years when the fandom changes and Jo doesn't have full rights anymore? Who know, but I'll be dead by then! Ha ha.

I have been reading this while at work, i have had to stop because i can't stand up now! It's gotten pretty warm in here but i can't even stand up to open the window! I'll have to try reading more of it later when i am alone in the office.

Thanks Johnlittlewood! I hope you read more than just the sexual parts not all of this is supposed to be sexual. There is a lot of the magic and politics in it....

To Slytherin_Mistess:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I have worked extremely hard on this. In fact, I am still adding dozens of scenes. It just so happens that I came on here just now to add another new scene. The newest scene is located in