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for If You Give A Boy A Kiss

by JBlake

schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I hope you do another chapter with this. You just left us with a little cliffy. Keep up the fucking fantastic work.

Kat
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo soooo soooooo wish you'd continue this!
person anniea
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow you need to change this to a long-shot instead of a one shot, that was too good to be true. *kisses*
person JBlake
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say thank you for your reviews, I'm glad that people enjoy this so much because it was fun to type. Sorry for the typos, it was un-beta-ed and when I read it over myself it all looked okay... as it tends to do. But I did catch some mistakes when I read it here. Anyway yeah, Miss Nikki you got the If Give A Mouse A Cookie thing right, it's what I thought of when the title came to me.

Also I'm not so sure if I will continue with this particular one but I will write more H/D because they are my favorite pairing. So thanks again for the reviews and those who are about to review (because I know you want to).
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this because when I read the title, it reminded me of that book that I read as a child. If You Give a Mouse a Cookie. You are probably asking yourself, now how in the world did she connect the two. I didn't but I was hopeing that it was something along those lines, that if you gave him a kiss he'd want a lot more. And my prayers were answered. If you want to write another that's a spin off of this or one that is in no way related, I'd be willing to read it. I'm going to be honest, it took me three days to read this. I enjoyed all three days, your writing kept me captivated but I still had things to do. Which is why it took me so long. There are a few mistakes, mainly typos so I wouldn't worry about it. I want to make this a long review for a long story but I'm on my way out the door. I'll review when I have more time.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

PS The review will have to do with the actual story.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please please continue!!!!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now that was brilliant. I love fanfictions where Draco and Harry are actors and you wrote this beautifully. Not to mention that scene at the end...that was hot. I hope you continue this <3.

With love,
Ristvak
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I cant exxpress the feelings have for this story. Great job! >w<

~Ley
person Bastian
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was pretty hot. I liked this it would be interesting to see another part since you said this was a oneshot.

Good job.
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hott!