rate_review Reviews

First, I do want to say that I am enjoying your story and the very detailed and sensual sex scenes that are going on here. I especially enjoyed the scene with Lucius and Severus joining in the most so far. Despite the enjoyable nature of the story my rather analytical mind keeps questioning the whole male pregnancy thing. One, I'm not certain why Harry seems to have to be the one to carry a child to term if he wants a family (or at least that seemed to be the implication, maybe because Draco is his primary but you also mention him getting pregnate by other males so that can't be it). He should also be able to impregnate females unless his sperm is impotent. Also I don't know if it's just too early in the story but aside from the breasts, he's developed no other female anatomy. He has no place to carry and nuture a child within him, or produce eggs to meet with sperm nor does he have the means to deliver a child naturally. Unless he has the anatomy and it's somehow dormant until something happens to stimulate it like a catalyst. After all Draco used a spell to cause Harry's breasts to start their change. It's just one thing I've never understood about stories that talk about Male pregnancy. just being magical doesn't allow for that kind of thing. A person needs to have some form of internal female anatomy and supply of eggs in order to create an embryo making all male pregnancy stories technically about hermaphrodites but without the parts to realistically carry out such an event. The whole Magic makes it so feels like such a poor and overused excuse in many other stories and I have been disapointed at the lack of evolution of harry's person to make him physically ready to carry a child. I probably sound like I'm complaining and for that I am sorry but I do hope you agree that the majority of male pregnancy stories fall horribly short of basic biology and it unfortunately grates on me. Maybe I will see more evolution of Harry so he can carry a child. I do hope so but that will probably make him seem to female for a lot of readers. I personaly don't care about gender having enjoyed both men and women but my logical mind still gets stuck on the biology. Still it's been a sweet and sexual story so far and I am curious enough about harry's future encounters to continue reading, though at a much slower pace. Take care. a

lol okay not even gonna lie here - when i read this story, i feel like a nympho XD seriously, this is great! okay, ther's an author on ff.net called Horribly Horny Harry - u guys and yur devious lil sexified minds should TOTALLY meet, if u haven't already ^^ lol ok, well i'm tapped, so i'll check out this story again later. ^^just wanted to let you know what an awesome job yur doing though ^^ sexier than hell!

keep on writing,

luv-blonde-bunny

Oh please please please update!!! It feels like ages since we had an installment of pornalisious fun! Also can we have some more hogwarts/Harry? He seems to be having too much fun with just four people when he could be having everyone! I love you story please write more!

Hello!
I found this story recently and decided to read it.I'm pretty sure it's the first time I've seen so much smut in only one story, I'm kinda impressed.I was actually wondering if you were planning on updating this story somewhere in the near future?Have you abandonned it altogether? Well, I appreciated reading this story and so I'll hope you'll give us readers a new chapter someday.
Tover

I love this story... I can't get enough of it... I would love for you to update because you just can't leave the story like this.... it's illegal... lol... Anyway hope everythings alright and please don't leave this story

Why am I still reading this dirty story, so goood -drool/nosebleed-.

damn you and yoru kinky story, I have join the dark side of the yaoi -gasp-

Please update? I hope you are well.

epp... Dumbledore *is majorly squicked* But everything else was massively hot and the Moony/Padfoot bit *dies*. I'm not sure if your still planning on finishing this but I would love love love to read more and I really really wanna see the bit where Harry gets beasted and then plugged holding all that inside!

are you going to update any time soon? i want to know what happens