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good chapter, what about at some point a goblin(Griphook) or more take Harry?, house elf(Dobby)?, what about Lucius Malfoy?

I have never been in love with a story this much. I almost cried when I got to the last chapter. Please write more cause I think I might become really depressed if you don't. So beautifully written and I'm so hot and bothered.

Great story! I can't believe the details you come up with. Have you thought of adding the centars to Harry's list?

I am suprised you have not written a scene with Herminone, considering she is his other best friend. Will this story only have male/male sex scenes? The female population mastrubating on the sidelines while every male in the wizarding world uses Harry as a vessel. I took a shot at reading this story for the steamy sex scenes, now I feel it a bit unfair that only the males so far have their shot at Harry. Your story is bit over the top at how wantonly submissive Harry is and clearly you have written how arousing it is to be dominant, but shouldn't Harry also experience some level of dominance in the sexplay. Flipping both sides of coin can be very fullfilling, always getting tails can get a bit tedious.

Another fetish you could incoropate that would lower Harry standards would be golden showers and/or swallowing urine. Hey you have plans for Harry to have sex with beasts why not drink their pee.

aww damn! i thought i would get to read snape/harry or lucius/harry in this chap from the way you started it. Well, doesnt matter, i'll get to read it later anyway yea?

oh i don't mind long story, infact i love it! and your story is very interesting.

...you're not gonna abandan your story like some writers, r u? cuz if u do i'll be sooo miserable.

keep up the good work! i'll be waiting for next update! ^-^

wow very very verygoo keep going and post
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

OMG! soooo glad you updated! LOVED the whole crabbe and golye scene! harry on all fours is VERY whorish, can't wait for Fang!

THANK YOU FOR THE PICCYS. OMG I Love the chappie, I love it I want to fuck it. I can't wait for the next piccy, the next chappie I WANT MORE!!! WHOORREEEEEEEYYY HARRYYYY!!! * deep breath* I'm good I'm go--MOORREE WHOREISH HARRY!!--od I'm done yup I can wait down.

~crimson
Harry is my favorite whore

lOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is so HOT! I liked most of it, but in this last chappie (6) they were way to rough on Harry! Honestly, what if they damage him so that he won't be able, or willing in the back of his mind, to get pregnant. The only other thing was, I liked all the other ideas as Harrys partners, in animals as well as humans, but for Hagrid and Buckbeak. Remember Hippogriff claws and that beak, they could, again, seriously hurt Harry. As for Hagrid, when I read about him with Harry, I had an image of the baby bursting out of Harrys stomach like the infant Aliens in the movies, with the exeption that the baby would come from Harrys stomach, instead of his cheast. So please, I'm begging you! Ees up a little on Harry and no Hippogriffs or Hagrid. If you want to discuss any ideas, my critics, the story, or just simply talk, my e-mail is varjoratsu84@luukku.com. I can also beta for you. There weren't many mistakes but the few that were there annoyingly stuck out. Thanks, and update soon!