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person Smuff
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darling, that was so, so, SO hott--my cheeks are burning! WOW, came back to see 2 new chappies and waaah!! Sirius and Remus finally here!!! I have to say that scene of R/S/H doing the threesome...X_X Gods, how I wanted to join them lol! I was salivating completly, your description of the blowjobs and well Harry savouring the cum in his mouth afterwards was deliciousssss! Might be filthy to most people, but i was sure well loving it! Thanks for keeping the dirty talk in mind, so honoured that you actually replied to my comment--let alone followed it!! I'm really liking this fic and i can't wait for Remus and Sirius to transform..especially when it involves Remus--"Wolf." which Severus so sexily called him---loosing control because he is so bloody horney and under the effect of the moon---and Harry just taking it all, full slutty that his and lovin it! GAAAAHH!!! I need a shower now!! What do u eat in the morning that possess you to write such things? Cause hey, I want it too! lol! Deff love yout fantasies, thank u for making us all participants!
person jade22d
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
☺Yay!!! All my favorite pairings under one roof. Have you ever had the urge to squeal so bad that you could physically feel it bubbling up in your throat. Well that's what happened when I discovered you had updated. My best friend/roomate came running to my room to see what was wrong. Good thing she already knows I'm a yaoi whore. As your #1 fan I demande you write more..............Please!!!!!☺
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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I like beast a little *grin* I can't wait for the Monney/harry Padddy/harry, ohhh could you have the Padddy/harry on head table fore the whole school to view you've left them all by them lonesome selves. YAY BEAST!
person balerina
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!!
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will tell you right now that yours is the hottest story I have every read! Don't stop now!!!
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this very well written and highly imaginative piece of smut and as old Oliver said, "Please Sir can i have some more."
person sanda
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Aalto
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sorry that I haven't answered your mailo yet. It appears I have lost your e-mail address. But one idea for the Buckbeak problem might be, that Harry's either sprayed with hormones, or drinks a potion that makes him naturally produce the hormones, that entices Buckbeak. Sort of like a feromon or summat. Or, Harry could turn/be turned in to a hippogrif, get Buckbeak to iseminate him, turn back to human and get pregnant that way. The possibilities are endless for one with good imagination.
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! You mean there's real person out there havin three pricks inside her body? o_O ...Thought it's just in fiction...

You're not going to make Harry get raped, r u? 'Cuz well..umm.. just put rape warning in that chap so i can skip it.. don't like the idea of rape, thats all.

Update soon, i'll be waiting ^^
person alma
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.