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for The Wizarding World’s Whore

by Subharrylover

person Aalto
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, a fabulous chapter, as always. Second, some suggestions... ;)

You, know, you could add a little creature feature to this story! Harry could have a little bit of some sort of feline creature genes in him, that gives him ears and a tail! There are so few stories with cattish Harry! Coming quite straight from that is this: I think, that because Harry's so public and wanton normally, he should be like, super private when the baby comes. Like giving birth in private and almost jealously keeping the baby hidden the first couple of weeks. You could pin it on his creature inheritance. That could also explain the pheromones he uses to allure other creatures to fuck him, like for one, the future Buckbeak scenario!

These are just my thoughts, you don't naturally have to use them, but if you find them good ebough, feel free to do so. Just, I would appreciate if you mention that it was from someone else, don't have to say from who.
person Leentjef
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good and hot keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your glorious sub!Harry smut! I will most definitely be sending you an e-mail to see the pictures you drew of selected scenes.
person luvhp
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You total TEASE! Leaving us hanging before Bill and Charlie could have their fun!
And Dumbledore, now that's gonna be interesting.
Keep 'em cumming please!
person misswarchan
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAYness for the updated-ness!!! I have an idea and want you to hear it out. First is Voldemort live in this fic? I hope so, because you should have him steal Harry and have a DE orgie (really you just CAN'T leave it out! *is begging*) I was wondering if there can be a Tom Riddle Jr. ...Jr. (Voldemort Jr. ...that's better. *damns' the TR name*) I've quite like this chapter *is damning self for reading it in public* I'll be awaiting the next update! ^_^

~Miss War-chan=
has had too much sugar today...o.OU
person jade22d
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No not crack....just sugar....and caffeine.....and maybe a little invader zim. *Drools* The scene with Kingsley was just woooooooooooooooooooooooooow. Update quickly or I will sing the DOOM SONG.
person Frosty
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! How do you do it??? 18 chapters of nothing but sex and each one better than the last. I can't wait for what you come up with next and I hope it's not TOO long of a wait. Anyway, GREAT story!! ^_^
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god I love those Weasleys - and I can't wait to see what happens with Bill and Charlie. ooh and Dumbledore as well! lush naughtiness to look forward to!

your story is bloody brilliant and considering I don't really go for mpreg fics usually, I am totally loving it.
person nastygrl
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love how nasty the smut is, but hot, hot hot!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot.