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for Sins of the Father

by StarKneazle

person kmplease
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good, please update soon!!
person Kilalla
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, intense. i love it

:)
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry just made things worse by telling Hermione what to do. After what she went through, she is still confused and afraid. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am glad that Draco wants to help her. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh a cliffe, i cant wait to see what happened!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

I'm speechless.

MORE! Great beginning. Very heartfelt. Goodjob!

<3 Kim
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing, well written and overall a good start to a probable excellent story, but poor Hermione!!!! Please update soon!!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I can't wait to see who the three figures are and why Hermione is screaming. Please update soon.
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is some intence begining. Please update soon. I'll be waiting...
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.