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for Sins of the Father

by StarKneazle

schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. No it is not full of action or smut, but it is one of those necessary little fillers that put hope in the story..so i like it! Have fun in Chicago, even if it is a business trip.
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am glad that she told Remus about what happened to her. I can't wait to read more to find out how she and Draco hook up, since this is to be a Draco/Hermione story. I mean, if all she thinks about when she sees him, is his father, then how will she be able to get closer to him. Please continue.
person thenorwgianone
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I really like this story:) but I must admit that I skipped some of the very dark bits.. What I love about this story is that it seems heartfelt and genuine:) And the part with Remus and Hermione is one of the best parts of fanfic I've ever read:)
So Thank you so much! =)
thenorwegianone xx
person Camryn
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it i love it i love it!!!!
please update asap!!! i love the Hr/D pairing!!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Very engaging.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope that Hermione will start talking to Draco about things. I don't believe that Ron and the others really want to hear what she went through. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I missed out on so many updates!!!, this story is excellent and the summary actually intrigued me to read it so I think it's ok but maybe just put in a request to change the summary in the summary this might make people read to see if they can think of one, confused? I know I am but hopefully you get what I'm saying lol xx
person Kilalla
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really do like this story, I understand where Hermione is comin from but will she open up? or will she harden up?

good job btw!
person What??
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG
person cateye
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I can't wait till you update.