AFF Fiction Portal
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice adaptation of the fairy tale to the Potterverse. I look forward to reading more.

A few typos, but you can fix those if you edit it.
person Storm
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the good work.
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhh! i really liked it!

are you going to put other short stories in this one? or are going to post as a new one?

Update soon!
person momoko
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor little Red Cap! The idea is really good, mixing the Grimm Brother's fairy tales with Harry Potter. I've never read the stories by the Brothers Grimm before though I have intended to for some time. Is the line of the story in this similar to the original? Anyway good job!
~gorgeousbowneyes
person alma
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story.
person jenv
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe. ^_^ This is so cute. The ending is great.
person seb
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh i like very much - can't wait to read the rest in the series!
person misslala
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was kinda hoping for more description overall, but I like the concept a lot. Will they always be short? Or will they get longer?