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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good, I'm not a huge fan of infidelity but your writing was great. It would be interesting if you continued it, but give a little background on the whole situation (marriage, the affair...).
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That very last part. You can almost hear the ominous music kick in there. Nice opening and does bear further exploration.