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for Crimes of the Heart

by Koukla22

person Kate
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jeez...what a sad chapter! I love how you've made Draco out to be really gentle. He's a kind and loving husband...I actually am sympathizing more with him than Hermione right now!

The bit at the end was really sad with the picture. Gosh, you rock! Can't wait for more!
person kmplease
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay what happen to Hermione's baby?? Love the story, please update soon.
person Extraho
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
merlin, both siri and daco loves her so much. i dot know who should win. ill be heartbroken eithher way.............*sniffs*
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. I am wondering, if she was pregnant, where is her child. I hope you mention something in the next chapter or two. Hopefully Draco will confront his wife about what she is doing. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person Kate
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oohh! I really like this. I'm glad you decided to continue it. I can't wait to see Draco's reaction in the next chapter.

It's nice to see a fic where it's not just physical with Hermione and Sirius! :)
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I feel sorry for Draco in this story, being lied to. Even though I like the pairing of Hermione/Sirius. I am not really liking Hermione in this story!!
person mesawka
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HELL YESSSSSS YOU BETTER CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have one word for you....PLEASE!!!!!

Keep it going, I absolutely love Sirius/Hermione fics and Draco/Hermione are my second favorite! You mixed both in one....I have to know what's going to happen. Will she leave Draco for Sirius? Or will her lover be left heartbroken and left to wander the world alone yet again? Will Draco stand for all this cheating business? Will he cheat on her? Or perhaps join in on her fun with Sirius? I have entirely too many fantasties and question and possibitlities for this story to end as a one shot!!!
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course you have to continue. I want to know what happens
person PadfootMoonySandwich
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HELL FUCKING YEAH CONTINUE WITH THIS! I swear, you better keep going or I will hunt you down....lmao just kidding. ;) But seriously, this has waaaay more potential than just being a one shot! Please continue on with it. That was a twist at the end. I never thought her husband would be Draco. By force, like a marriage law, or by own free will? That's what I would like to know. But I love how Sirius and Hermione are soo passionate with each other. Sirius being the one worried about time they have together and Hermione being all "Who cares. Fuck my husband" sort of thing. I really like it!! Naw, like is too much of an understatement. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!