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for Crimes of the Heart

by Koukla22

person risotto
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I feel muyself pitying Draco.
person cosmoplitan
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is it odd that i wast this to be a DHr fic? i mean there's just soemthign so hearetwrenchign about ti that makes you want them, to overcome all those obstacles and still find a way back to one another after each having mucked up so much in the relationship

there's somethgin about the manner in which you depict them that compells you to hold onto that infallible hope for them

(odd that i originally liked this fic for being a SB/Hr but would now eagerly accept it being DHr lol)
person bridey
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is really beautiful and I would love to read more. Is "Crimes of the Heart" complete? At first I thought that it couldn't be--there just seems so much left to develop. But if your aim was to point out the irony of Sirius and Hermione's relationship, then I guess you could call that the end. I'd love to read more though!!

schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love your story! I hope you update!
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is rather depressing i must say lol but i must say i don't know where you are taking this story(which to me is a good thing) and i can't wait to find out
person hollymonster
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is sad....but great. Please do continue!!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update soon? I really like where this story is going!
person erika
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow is that sad.......
im a draco hermione shipper
myself so i hope everything
works between them but i love your story
update soon!!!!!!!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's so sad. I was crying all through that last chapter and I honestly think you've captured their pain and growing separation perfectly. I don't care what the pairing is, I just love this very well written story. Keep going :)
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione and Draco can at least talk about their situation, and then they can move on with their lives. I would really hate for her to get pregnant by Sirius and still be married to Draco. Although that would add a great plot to this story. Please update again soon.