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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so did the baby die?
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I hope you aren't tired of hearing congratulations yet, 'cause it doesn't look like anyone is tired of giving them! And deservedly so! Two great chapters; sweet and yummy smut, and a nice Ron and Hermione interlude, with Ron for once not taking no for an answer from Hermione! I'm glad you wrote this like this, Ron being a grown up, I get a little tired of him always being a git in stories. The only thing I find fault with, Oh Cruel One, is the freakin' cliffhanger!! Grrrrrrr! Update! Immediately!! :D
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have got to be kidding me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate cliffies!!!!!!!!!*throws heavy things at a certain writers head* sorry I learned how to throw a temper tantrum from my 3 year old she would be proud. Please oh please update soon!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wait what's going on? ron's being a man?! it's a miracle. though i'm a little sad that it's drawing to an end. please update soon *kisses*
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, congrats on brilliantly meeting your personal challenge! I liked this chapter as well as all the others, but I don't think you rely too heavily on dialogue. I think the story is great just the way you've been writing it, I think you've maintained a nice balance between dialogue and action and I, for one, don't think you need to change anything around, just keep writing as you've been. Obviously from the number of hits (over 20,000!) and favourable reviews, you're doing something very right!!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on yet another awesome chapter and for managing to make a chapter without any speech work so well! I commend you on that. The only time I go without speech is during sex scenes it just gets in the way for me. Too much talking not enough loving I say.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story today and I must say that in cases such as this where the story is so long and I am reading it all to catch up I find myself skimming and reading the smut and some other key points and moving on checking for the end. With this story I actually eagerly read every word of it and was shocked to find myself at the end of today's update and quite disappointed as well. I really like this story usually snarry is not one of my favorites, but this one definitely goes on my list of daily checks! Keep up the good work!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ick but good update soon *kisses*
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ew! Ew! Ew! Is correct. A scaled erect cock, nice one, disgusting, but creative. I can't wait for chapter 37, hope it's soon. ^_^
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Harry and Severus bonding. ^_^