rate_review Reviews

good story!!!

oh no!!!! im glad you're writing a sequel because i would not fogive you if you didnt. im waiting patiently......

alright alright alright you've pulled me in for the sequel. *kisses*

I have to say that I loved this story up untill now. How did Dumbledor expect the bonding to work if he seperated the two of them just after it was compleate! I could see it working if Harry knew the plan but now he must be broken hearted thinking that Sev didn't want Harry or the baby. You have left me wanting to cry and I'm not sure that I could read the second story, espicaly where Harry now feels betrayed and one rarly gets over that feeling easly. I wory that sanpe is now compleatly out of the picture and the daughter that he was looking foward to he will never get to see, and Harry will be all alone.

*huggles depressed SP* Wow. That was ... reading that last quote gave me so many chills!!! Very moving and sad. How horrible for Harry to have to go through that.

Now bring on the sequel!! I need some closure!

aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh, well with the hope of the sequel this ending isn't as bad. *kisses*

so not fair! I wanted a happy ending now i am near tears. poor baby sapphire. will there be a sequel? please *puppy eyes*

*sobbing*.......I'm gutted........

.....the quote at the end......it was brutal.....but fitting. I think this, in terms of writing, is a good ending, and I think it's very brave of you to end it this way knowing that all your fans will be devastated. I certainly am, but still, I applaud you for sticking to the story YOU wanted to write rather than going with what would obviously have been the fan favourite. Your writing is wonderful, the fact that you make your readers laugh and cry and really feel for your characters and what they experience is the mark of a true writer. I loved everything about this story, and although I complained about the cliffhangers, I liked them too, they were well-placed and conducive to the suspense of the story line, which is how they should be used, rather than as a cheap shot by the author, which is how they are, unfortunately, used by far too many writers. You can rest assured, dear SickPuppy, you have served your fans well and that we are all waiting on pins and needles for the sequel and more of your wonderful writing. Congratulations and, Domo, arigato gozaimasu, Sensei, on another brilliantly written story that was an absolute joy to read. 10/10 A+

I like where this thread is going^_^.