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please update sooooooooon. you dont reallyhave an exuse- you've already finished the story *fishing for chapters*

Awww! Come on, Snape, why can't it happen? *pouts*

I was so happy to see another chapter for this story (as well as for your other story!) that I abandoned writing my own story to read yours! (Shh, dont' tell anyone else.) I think Harry's instincts need to be left entirely in charge from here on out LOL And Severus needs to lose some of that famous self-control.

Nah, it's brilliant like it is. I love a good tension-filled build-up. And Draco! Being such a prat ... someone needs to spank him. Hard. *eyes glaze over*

Grr!! See? The sexual tension is already sending my mind spiralling into the gutter (not that it had far to spiral ^_^).

Lovely chapter, hun, and I can't wait for more!!!

wonderful update. i love that i'm also of two minds like severus. i don't want to believe that dumbledore planned this pregnancy but i also can not put it past him. lol. and hermione! even i felt embarrassed by her sudden line of smutty questions. lol. anyway, it was great. keep up the good work.

it's the grape juice right that's the potion. no one ever takes up on dumbles offer of muggle food or drink. maybe harry had the "grape juice" when he went to see dumbles the first time. please update soon *kisses*

excellent. you had me hooked from the very first chapter. your writing is tight, sharp and very clean. you manage to give all information needed without dragging out the plot with unnecessary subtext. and the sex scene, fucking flawless. it was hot, the pacing was perfect, the visual was titillating and best, it's easy to follow both severus and harry's emotions and thoughts throughout. i like that harry's private thoughts are age appropriate to him and vastly different in format to severus' private thoughts. i feel the characterization is right on cue and harry's sexual realization very realistic and unrushed. most impressive is your depiction of dumbledore. you've managed to make him disturbing, yet benevolent. in the books you believe dumbledore is a good man but his motives and actions are quite questionable. many people have a difficult time showing the reality of dumbledore's actions without making him into an awful manevolent force. you walk a fine line ie: you make a point of expressing that severus FEELS manipulated without labeling dumbledore AS manipulating. if that makes any sense. and on a small note i like that you manage to maintain harry's close relationship with his friends despite ron and hermione's presence being somewhat scarce. overall this is fresh and witty and i cannot wait to see where this is going.

really injoyed this story. cant wait to read more of this story, hope to see an update soon. ^_^

OMG!!!!!

This chapter practically had me rolling on the floor gasping for air, I was laughing so much! LOL even now, whenever I think of Hermione rattling on about gay sex to force Harry to 'fess up, I break out in another round of giggles.

Bravo to Harry for pushing past his denial! Can't wait to see how the relationship between Harry and Severus progresses. Great chapter! Now I'm off to peek at your other story ... *grin*

I like it. Please update soon.

Oooo! I'm so glad I finally got a day off where I can just read all the great Snarry that's being posted - and this is EXCELLENT Snarry!!

You're right ... smut is tricky to write, but you've been doing an awesome job of it so far LOL Can't wait for future lemony action!

I absolutely love your characterization of Snape. He is my all-time favorite character, so it makes me all bouncy and happy when I read a fic that does him justice. Thank you for that! *bunny hop*

More! Soon! Please? *puppy dog eyes*

oooh i have to know when this is updated. pweety pwease could you email me when you update? my email's shadowama5678@aol.com this is really gay. and poor harry so confused and in denial. update soon *kisses*