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by SickPuppy

person alma
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start.
person anniea
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving this story, still wondering where it will lead. update soon *kisses*
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Dumbles. He tries hard, he really does. I feel kinda sorry for him, being the one who has to make the 'hard decisions' in the war. And just how many 'battles against evil' is he expected to lead? First Grindelwald, then Voldemort part one, and now Voldemort part two? Give the man a vacation already! LOL

But ... poor Harry and Sev. It's bad enough for both of them to be tools of the war, but now their innocent child as well?? Yucky. Hopefully this brings them closer together.

And can I just say - OMG! Having Dumbledore walk in while they're having sex!! I practically pulled a muscle I was laughing so hard.

Loved it! Can't wait for the next!
person Jan
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is a great story! I can't wait for your next update, hope it's soon. ^_^
person Extraho
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good thing he cant get any more pregnant. i just hope H doesn't panic in the morning
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. *blinks* Just ... wow.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bring on the torment!!

Err ... I mean ...

Great chapter! You're such a tease *winks* but I forgive you since you hinted that a lemon was on its way. Though it's a pity that Harry's instinctive urges fizzled out just when things were getting good *pouts* What a time for his hormones to short-circuit!

I just want to hug Severus. I've always thought that it must be a pretty bleak existence for him - living with the knowledge that he's probably not going to survive the war (though, if I had anything to say about it, he'd outlive everyone). He needs to take his happiness where he can find it, consequences be damned!

Wheeee! I'm inspired now. Thanks for another excellent chapter, sweetie! *huggles*



person anniea
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving this story so much, it's so hot, and more hotness, i am so glad that i decided to pick this story up. please update soon *kisses*
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.