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by SickPuppy

schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry's turned into a nymphomanic.
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, I've read every chapter of this. It's pretty good. Is Snape going to be become more of the expectant-father-to-be in future chapters? I guess he's still weirded out over Harry being pregnant, eh? But don't get me wrong I love the smut. And this IS Snape we're talking about. xD I guess I have an appetite for fluff at this moment. lol. I look foward to the next chapter.
person liza
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
in answer to your question, yes. i do think you managed to walk the line between manevolent and benevolent dumbledore. which must have been extremely difficult once it's admitted that dumbledore was behind the pregnancy. like always, dumbledore's actions are questionable and somewhat infuriating and even a bit hurtful. not much different than when harry lost a spot of trust in dumbledore after sirius' death and the revealment of the prophecy. something that might have been avoided had dumbledore simply been honest with harry from the start. then again when you look at the situation from the headmaster's point of view, you can begrudgingly understand why he did things the way he did. but like everything else concerning dumbledore, it teaches you never to take him completely at face value. so yeah, great job.
person liza
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
quick note: the end of chapter 15... fucking brilliant!
person alma
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter.
person alma
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person anniea
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
do you see me complaining? the two of them going at it like rabbits is just DANDY with me! update soon *kisses*
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squuueeeaaalll!!*

Forget Dumbledore, who wants to talk about that old coot anyway? LOL

Soooo hot! And I loved where Harry called Severus's name! The beginnings of intimacy! I'm so happy I can't stop using exclamation points!!

If this is what you come up with after I update, I really need to update more often!! ^_^ Awesome chapter, hun!