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Oh flipping hell! That was a sad ending, I was blubbing! I thought using the quotes was very clever, and I like the little bits at the end where you're chatting with Severus and Harry, and I think their terms of endearment for each other are really sweet. Oh, and Draco's secret was interesting. Bsd Lucius! 

But, you're really good at coming up with interesting stories to weave the smut into, bravo! 

This was great! Now on to the sequel!!

Here I was, enjoying the story, and chapter 23 starts copying the damn book. Crap. I hate the book.

I loved every part of this story but the end. Poor Sapphire! :'(

Sorry my review isn't more detailed but I read this on my phone days ago but couldn't review from there. Now I'm on a laptop, I kinda can't remember much cuz I read part two and it was good but a little disappointing. This one was much more original and brilliant. Still I highly recommend them both! 5+ to this one and 4+ to TNIB! :D

Wow. That was a depressive ending. So sad. To think that they have 28 hours to consumate their bond otherwise it would fail. Sad situation indeed.

I do not know if you are still reading reviews for this story but it seem appropriate to write anyways. The ending was perfect. Sure it was not happy but it was the only reasonable one and it was brave of you to stick with it. I am gleefully going to start on that second part and while happy endings are not necessary it is my hope that poor Sev

So many chapters, and still, I managed to read them all in one day. I've never got bored, with every passing chapter, I've became more interested. You wrote really amazing story, you should be proud of yourself, because there's not many fanfics like this...interesting, thrilling, heartbreaking, full of love...
I really enjoyed reading this story of yours, I like happy-endings, so I hope that sequel will end...happily.
Keep it up, see you soon.
Kibi11

Very much enjoyed your story!
Thanks for beginning a sequel!
Loved the developing love story>

Thanks,
R

OH GOD.
I HATE YOU.
*Collapses*

I'M SO SAD NOW.
Ah huh huh hurr...*Sobs*

Fan-freakin'-tastic writing, a great plot (the only mpreg fanfiction I've ever read and bothered to continue with--usually the way the man is impregnated is ridiculous, but you made it seem almost normal), and a flawless ending.
It was a perfect ending, with a realistic idea behind it, and I respect that.

...BUT I'M STILL MILDLY DEPRESSED, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
I'll have to go and re-read the smut chapters to cheer myself up. *Shifty eyes*

I read all this in under two hours, I was that enthralled, and by GOD I enjoyed it.
Thank you very, very, very much for posting this. A few errors, but don't we all make them? Some were typos anyway (damn them to Hell...).

And, tomorrow, and many nights after that, I shall be sure to go and fangasm over your other fics.
Thank you again!

And goodnight!

*snickers* "I own and operate a ferocious ego."--Bill Moyers

SickPuppy, have you ever heard the phrase "Great minds think alike"? That quote by Moyers is one of my favourites!!

I'm glad that, as with "Tasks" you took the time to add author's notes. And oh....the sequel!!!!! I, and apparently everybody else, cannot wait!! I hope, Dear SickPuppy, that you are moving on from mourning what is done, and that the thought of what is yet to come brightens your day.

Hugs to you for a job well done!!