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okay, so i can see why you ended it like this, but it's so sad! please don't leave it like this! i agree with Sakya and her review. i also have to add, what happened with Harry and his Blank Outs? does he continue to have them? What started them, why do they happen, how do they happen? Did he ever take that second potion Madam Pomfrey gave him and did it help?

And Harry can't keep Eri Potter secret forever! she's bound to be a witch (isn't she?!). what happens if she gets sick? all those childhood illnesses and whatnot. Harry's not the best at potions, how does he take care of her?

i love your story, and would be sad not to see a sequel, but I'd also like to read fanfiction from you!

Ending? This cannot be the end. How can it be?

Ok, MAYBE, if you do a sequel, say, 11 years later, with Eri going to school. I mean, what kind of ending is this where Draco doesn't know Harry is having his child (or had his child, since the girl is already born), Harry has cut himself from all his friends (even Ginny?) and is living alone in the middle of nowhere?

I NEED a sequel for this one... or at least an epiloge.

Pleeeeeeaaase.

I sooo don't want this to end!!! Does Draco ever find out? Chapter 19? Sequel????

Would Like to know Drake's action when he see Eri Potter(?) Emerald eyes like Harry Please!!!!

So, this isn't the last chapter?

Wow. That's not seriously the end is it? If they don't get back together I'll be pissed.

Excellent story. Please post more soon :)

Nice story and even if Harry doesn't tells anyone, Harry Potter getting a child can stay a secret for long.

Great fic, I love it. You have a great plot here but you do need a beta - there is some mispelling here and there but the main problem is using a wrong word because it has a similar sound to the one you actually want(dare/dear, Through/True and so on).

Anyway, this is not a flame, just some constructive critisism and I hope you update soon.

OMG YOUR GOING TO FINISH IT!!NNNOOOO i want more. please!