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by BlazeOfGlory15

person Lily
schedule March 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really good story! I liked that the whole setup for the story was introduced along with the action - not time spent on a long intro.

It would be very straight forward for Ginny to mess with Ron about showing signs of pregnancy (he properly wouldn't know how long it takes to show). Another idea could be for her to start hitting on him, and making him flustered and thinking that she was into him - that could easily lead to further storydevelopment

 

Thanks for the storry

Best regards Lily

schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, and as far as an idea, why not have her tie him up and show him what it's like to be powerless.
kinda like rape for rape. ;p
person dristi
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi, fantastic story....and smut!

how about bringing in other members of the weasley family?

keep up and bring on more smut!
person kittesa
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a good beginning. she should be making shallow advances or signals to ron. on a stormy night ginny could enter his room and take him. they could form a relationship that can lead to a slip up (pregnancy). They could end up living together or some shit so. i will love that to happen.
person quietone
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic but like those before me i would like to request for longer chapters please, as for ideas. maybe ginny can oh so subtly masturbate when Ron's around and call out his name. me thinks a lot of excessive flirting is needed to make him squirm. just ideas, hope it helps, and please keep this up!!!
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters are way too short.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i dont get what you mean by its a GoF fic?

anyway that story is so hot. i like rape stories...but she enjoyed it...so its not really rape.
anyway i love that its ron and ginny. im a huge fan of them. you wrote it well also. and i love weasleycest alot and write it myself lol. i have at least 4 weasleycest stories. you should check them out:) i also rp weasleycest on my site...if your ever interested in rping with us, go ahead and join..btw lots o fpeople on my site are into weasleycest so itd mean alot if you post your stuff on my site

please come back with more asap


hmm as for ideas. I duno. ginny can bind ron to the bed when ron has a morning arousal and make her rape him lol. or she can wake him up sucking him off as he is handcufed to the bed.

not sure. it'll be great either way


angela
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh im not a harry fan so i can careless lol
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I think that Ginny should black mail Ron into having sex with some animal or something.
person TifLaw
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good. Can't wit to read what happens next. Ideas??? I don't know... if she really wants to f with him she should just say things like "good sleep last night Ron?" "Mine's was terrible... bad dream... but it turned out good" "I could barely remember anything like it"... Hope that was helpful... :)