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by SnapesSweetheart

schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 3! A therapist? That might hurt Harry even more! His husband feels he can't talk to him.
person nsg
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this better.
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please!
person qwerty
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was good while it lasted
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story. I don't mind it being on hiatus for a while. I can understand how you would not want to write something like this when you are getting over a relationship. we would not want draco or harry getting damged. well in draco's case to damaged. ^__~ well hope you pick this one back up when you feel better. gotta go. ja ne ^___^
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh by the way I hope that your ex finds someone he cares about as much as you did him and they cheat on him just like he did you. it would show him how you felt when he cheated on you. and it would serve him right. the cheating &%!$*&!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope things get better! I'm dying to know what Draco's fetishes are. Will they be in chapter 4?
person toads70
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story please update soon...sorry about your ex *hugs*
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope we get a happy ending. Even if Draco is into "whatever",if he goes to someone else for it, that's still cheating.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you feel better, or get even.

I noticed one mistake in the beginnning that threw me off. We're talking chapter three of course. You said that, Harry and Hermione told Ginny, when Ginny's talking to Harry. I'm not sure who you meant but I'm as sure as I can be when we're talking about me, that you didn't mean Harry in that sentence.

Besides that, it was nice. I'm really enjoying how you protray your characters. Borrowed or not, you've taken them and matured them to you're own liking. I wonder what Ginny has up her sleeve. I kind of like her in this story. She doesn't come off as the perfect little twat. Maybe I missed it, and if so just tell me to reread the story. Where's Ron? Not that it's not refreshing to read a story without him in it, but I'm not used to it.

To make a long review short. I commend you on a job well done and look forward to the next chapter.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole