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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I just wondered if you plan on continuing this story. I check back quite often and would like to know if more chapters will be added. Thanks!
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have started something very interesting here, I hope you continue with it. I like how you have written Lucius in this story, I think it fits his character well. I'm definitly looking forward to the next chapter. Is Charlotte going to make an appearance soon?
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Hot! Somehow the idea of Lucius casually loosening his clothing and fiddling with cufflinks as he
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2; Lucius is playing with fire deciding to bed a wife he had basically said he had no interest in. I wonder how she will react to his appearance in her bedroom? It sounds as though he hasn't been seen in there in a long, long time. Does he normally have 'adventures' with other women? He has his fantasies firmly organized in his mind. Pseudorape with the female showing equal amounts of fear and desire.
In Narcissa's case, Lucius is being pretty cold-blooded using her for relieving him of his libidinous stress. An interesting glimpse of Lucius' mindset. It looks like Charlotte is going the be the next conquest du jour.
In Narcissa's case, Lucius is being pretty cold-blooded using her for relieving him of his libidinous stress. An interesting glimpse of Lucius' mindset. It looks like Charlotte is going the be the next conquest du jour.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more more!!!
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: I rather like this Lucius. He's the arrogant, racist, supercilious, charming, totally mesmerizing wizard we all know and love. Is Charlotte going to be the OFC in this story? Lucius does seem to have a weakness for the female form, muggle or magic person. Is he married in your story?
Is your timeline completely outside the worries of tying your plot to canon? That suits me. Trying to tie in details from the books is always a struggle.
MY only worry is that I do hope you finish this story. I've been left high and dry by several others and it's always disappointing to be left with half a story when it starts out so well.
I like your writing style and descriptive abilities. The descriptions painted a well-rounded picture without overwhelming the action. If Charlotte is going to be the heroine, what does she look like? So far we have brown eyes. Just curious. A very nice beginning. I wonder what our nasty Pureblood will do next (or whom)?
Is your timeline completely outside the worries of tying your plot to canon? That suits me. Trying to tie in details from the books is always a struggle.
MY only worry is that I do hope you finish this story. I've been left high and dry by several others and it's always disappointing to be left with half a story when it starts out so well.
I like your writing style and descriptive abilities. The descriptions painted a well-rounded picture without overwhelming the action. If Charlotte is going to be the heroine, what does she look like? So far we have brown eyes. Just curious. A very nice beginning. I wonder what our nasty Pureblood will do next (or whom)?