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for The Bond

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh how I love this story!!!! I think I have become addicted, my fingers were almost trembling while I looked for an update, and when I found no less than two new chapters it was like christmas came early this year!!! I absolutely love the Hermione/Severus interaction in this story, it is so wonderful to have an author writing them like this, still somewhat in caracter, but also willingly doing their best in an unexpected situation. I bet quite a bit of money that Ginny will have more reasons for envy of Hermiones relationship with Severus before this story is finished, I know that I would have loved to be in Hermiones place:-)) I should almost not ask since you have just added two new chapters, but I can beg: Please, please update again soon!!!
person Citten
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just read the first chapter. GREAT! SUPURB! WONDERFUL! i love it and it was long and desribive-both things i love! now i am sure i dont need to say this but (okay thinking 3 things at once).....PLEASE CONTINUE.... please keep up the wonderful length.....and please, please, PLEASE, dont skip more then is aboslutely nessariary and needed-thank you! :) cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!
person Citten
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HISTACAL!!!! i cant believe that she would accually say something out loud! (mcgongall-sorry bad speller) i just have to tell you that you better be writing LOTS more for i will be waiting. ;) things befor i forget, one is that i love their personalities the way that you have put them just sligthly different than the books but wonderful! two is something that i forgot to put in my review from chapter one and that is i cant believe that hermione laughed at severus-that was just mean. well until next time! :)
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hermione and severus are going to be watching porn live in the form of Lucius and some whore
person shelagh
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!! And yes the black leather outfit was spectacular. Draco looked pretty hot in all black as well.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if i may make a suggest have the woman that dose it with Lucius be Trelawney that should make both hermione and severus a little sick to see
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if you ever what to chat you can email at lunarsilverstarmoon@yahoo.com or if you have a myspace we can talk on there to. i help a friend of mine whose husband was also in the army when he was gone by chating with her online
person Apryl
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot and humorous...YUM! Keep up the good work. I hereby issue a challange. I have a vision but can't draw to save my life. Someone out there needs to capture the scene from this chapter of Severus trying to usher a curious Hermione from the room while glaring over his shoulder at a smirking Malfoy.
person Yria
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...I`m so angry that english is not my native language...because I want to write a lot about this story !!! But I can only say that i adore it. Very good idea, very good plot!!! I have only one request : give them a little time! They should make small steps...the "tension" beetwen Severus and Hermione is very fascinating thing here.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great! poor minerva lol