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by Hellagoddess

schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED it. very good work. cant wait for another.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED it. very good work. cant wait for another.
person Extraho
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
never really thought about that. brilliant
person Leenah (not signed in)
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Loved every bit of this. Wonderful on so many levels. I kinda want to read it again. I'll just go do that :) If you feel like writing a sequel know that you'll have at least one eager reader :)

Leenah.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant. Funny as all get out and hot. I loved that bashful way that Dan asked Tom to role play. I was estatic when Tom agreed and then got into character. I even enjoyed the little 'glasses' interruption. Oh, I don't think I'll ever see that wand the same way again. You're a genius. I've read some Tom/Dan slash before but this was by far one of the best ones I've read. The way you made Rupert figure it out was pretty funny too. "...he's always hanging with Dan, sneaking off to his trailer..." This was too cute. You would have thought he'd figure it out when he heard Dan call out the name Malfoy. Who else would have been Malfoy...Jason Isaac. That'd be bad, bad and slightly hot. Oh, who am I kidding. I'd most likely look around astonished and say something along the lines of, "OMG, I don't believe she wrote this. It's hot!" LOL, I'm trying to be truthful with myself, if no one else.

~~Avid Tom/Dan Shipper -Nicole
person ShadowRaven
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so AWESOME!!!!! We need like Way more of those Real Thing stories! Way WAY WAY MORE! Hope you write another one soon!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was probably the most amusing thing I've ever read. I definitely enjoyed the idea of Tom and Dan together, seeing as how both of them are the hotest things walking the set. Except for Rupert, who should have been involved. Would have amused me even more :]