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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never thought this would work, but omg the idea of role play was so hot!!! :D:D:D
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like the storyline. Hilarious. I can't think of anything wrong with this story at all ( besides the eye color thing, but not that important). I love it! Keep up the good work!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a hot pair, whether real or fictional.
Great job. =>
Great job. =>
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read a lot of these stories, but I have to tell you -- that one was just top notch! Excellent way to bring reality to fantasy!!!!
--RD
--RD
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo love it!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh omg i love role-play please write more with them PLLLLEASSSSSSSSSSE!!!!!!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was laughing and feeling all hot and bothered at the same time. Very nicely done! Whene Dan asked Tom to call him Potter I started howling. This was perfect!! Please make another one-shot like this!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT. Gods, you made me laugh so hard. Amazing.
Just one tiny tiny complaint. NO, it's not even a complaint, I just want call your attention to a little mistake. First you wrote Dan has hazel eyes, and later you wrote about green eyes. But actually he has beautiful clear blue eyes.
Just one tiny tiny complaint. NO, it's not even a complaint, I just want call your attention to a little mistake. First you wrote Dan has hazel eyes, and later you wrote about green eyes. But actually he has beautiful clear blue eyes.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
best laugh I've had all day! Usually I'm not much for Dan/Tom, but I really enjoyed this one.