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by Hellagoddess

schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I wish that people would make more of Tom/Dan stories.

It was excellent.
person LadyofCarom
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No plans to continue it? WHY NOT???? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue it!!!! Your writing is brilliant!!!!
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I am glad you wrote a second chapter. I am not into RPS very much but the role playing idea was awesome!!!!! I do hope that you decide to write more one shots from this!!! Thanks for writing this!
person KitBaiu
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good idea! The role-playing was wonderful. :) And I loved the use of the Veriteserum in the sequel. I wonder what Alan Rickman would think. >.> Keep up the good work. :)
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, I almost instantly knew what he'd used as lube. And from that point on I couldn't stop laughing. This was hot and funny, the only thing that could have made this better was a nice chocolate coating. Lol, I like the way Rupert was standing behind them, when Dan 'berated' Tom. If someone had caught them on the desk, or over the cauldron for that matter, I'd definately pay almost anything to own that. Once again you've done a great job.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
person Konoko
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious! I've never read another fic like it! Good job! And you should definitely continue!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good lol! I love people finding out. I was half expecting them to find the lost bottle of lube somewhere on set as well lol. You SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO000000000000000000000000000000ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo have to write more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely love it!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This honestly entertains me so much, I think you should keep going, just with random one-shots like you are. It is absolutely amusing, and hot at the same time.
person Kermit
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue, it is unique and I enjoy it
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, that chapter was funnier thant the last. hope u keep it up sumhow. btw, this story is based on which movie?