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for Oblivious

by hphglover

schedule June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So cute!
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love love love love this!
person luvhp
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwww, that was so sweet. I'm not usually a Hr/H shipper, but this one was done very well!! Liked it alot!
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job wished it was longer though i love harry and hermione very much and you did them justice with this fic. Please make longer ones like this. LOVE UR WORK!!!
person Bonza87
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very impressive! I really enjoyed reading that, and the ending was so sweet :)

There were some minor typo's but it didn't detract at all from the story. usually I never read oneshots as I like more depth to my fanfics. I tend to find that a oneshot is mostly all sex and no story line, congratulations on making this one stand out from the pack.

Regards,

Bonza87
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I love H/Hr fluffyness :)

I gotta say that I really woundn't mind another chapter (please?).

5/5!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff.
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very good.The sex scene could've been more graphic, but then again, when could it not be? ;)