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by Ms_Figg

person teenertots1
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew you were gonna leave us hanging haha....is sevvy gonna get his first bj? wee cant wait for the celebration :)
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God ms_figg you are such a tease! This story is so addicting and you cut us off...please update soooooon!
person Muffy
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ron...*smack* He is fun though. Sev has a lot to consider now that he's made his choice. I appreciated Hermione's struggle with her own feelings. Fighting the attraction and understandably so. It is a big risk for her all around. Thanks for the update.
person gowvan
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"A chestnut colored cat with amber eyes looked up at him."

Brilliant! Oh how I love how you "tweak" canon. Combining a Crookshanks-type cat and Hermione's Polyjuice mishap in Book 2 and making it work like this!
Oh I love it. Great chapter and Hermione was so terrific in this one. Love the voice you're using on her.

schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are my queen!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love checking back to see your updates every day! Gives me something to look forward to other than more morning sickness...

I like how hermione gave severus her offer this chapter XD I could almost picture the looks on everyone else's faces. Priceless!
person gowvan
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Severus' innocence wouldn't last the night."

Oh oh oh...can't wait!
person Tenar10r
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a super potion idea!
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, I believe, ms_figg that you are just teasing us now x Loved the updates and Hermione's battling feeling's towards Severus xxx