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Oh, Figg! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

This is such a great story! What a creative idea to switch the characters. It was full of lemony goodness and excellent story telling. Way to go!!!

oh! that was such a sappy sweet ending. i loved it. for awhile there i was worried you would decide to be contrary and give us a ... less than happy ending. the whole story was great. so funny. i loved it all. sorry for gushing so much and repeating myself, but i loved it.

fabulous, fabulous. Love this story. You put so much humanity into your writing! Thank you once again.

awww.
i've been following this damn story for 47 chapters and i have to say, i'm actually pleased. =]
thanks.

*squeals* This fic has such amazing sex scenes. And Severus is so darn cute when he's thinking of different sex techniques. The "angry witch" is especially great. Thank you for clearing up that he only needed several days of urine; I was initially confused when he used the toilet after her. I was surprised that she actually used the philosopher's stone; she must have really fallen for him. Their separation was a good and useful plot point when she realizes she's lonely without him. And the conjured rose that actually grows and blooms with Severus's love and affection is just awesome.

Lovely. Thanks for the update.

gowvan: Women need a different pov to enjoy smut. It is an emotional act for us, most of the time . . . and thoughts and feelings and words as well are as much a turn on as the physical act. Guys only need physical descriptions and they're fine. Not saying straight descriptions of sex can't turn a woman on, but come on, we're more complicated. lol. We need to work up toward the good stuff. All I do is reflect that in the lemons. Without being able to "feel" what the characters "feel" emotionally, it just wouldn't be as satisfying and rather dull since all that would give us is blow by blow.

"He stuck it in and pumped. She screamed and came."

Oh yeah. That's hot. not. rofl.

Gees, that was hot...amazing! I must agree there are perks to having a virgin all to yourself to train and educate ;)

I like it. Please update soon.