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for In an Alternate Universe

by Ms_Figg

schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no reason to be sorry for the chapter ;) it was very reasonable and very sweet in the end,
it was a necessary chapter and very nicely written. it's still awkward for me to read it
'the other way around' xD but well, it's something else for a change. go on! :D
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, no barbs and arrows here. You said it yourself; this is entirely different. That was a very sweet little chapter--with some funny moments, too. It's so cute the way he jumps on her every time he has half a chance.
person mari
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahahhahaha omg!!!! lol i cant stop laughing about that song!!! hahahahahahahahahahahahaha......^_~ please update soon ^_^
person Jen618
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well I hope things improve for him because right now he's not doing such a great job. He's so funny.
person ChaosProphet
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhhhh that was hot. the last few lines about needing a bit of soul to make a living thing, and how severus was the first to ever give such a thing to hermione.... that made the entire chapter - severus' puppy-like eagerness and hermione's weary, jaded resignation - one of the hottest pre-lemon setups ive ever read. the sex will be amazing, i know it. just, guh...
person Kate
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAH! I LOVE YOU FOR INCORPORATING MARVIN GAYE. Dammit Ms Figg, you are the greatest.

Way to draw it ouuuuuuuuuut though. Hurry up and make with the lovin!
person Slave4Severus
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Still Laughing*
I LOVE this story. I love all your other stories too, but this role reversal is just having me crack up left and right. THANK YOU for writing it.
person pittwitch
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Buy the book, then by the book! LOL ... too good Missy, too good!
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
made me laugh good chapter