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for In an Alternate Universe

by Ms_Figg

person Jen618
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. He doesn't take no for an answer, does he? She told him before and now she's told him about 20 times, and I bet he still hopes. I wish you would continue. There's room for more!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hope you do go on, it would be nice to see a bad girl/good guy. Find it wonderful to read.
person Angie30
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!!!!!!!!!!! That was extreamly hot and sexy

person Muffy
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness gracious! *swoons*

Please do continue. I'd be glad to read what happens to this AU sort-of-couple.

*smiles sweetly*

Thanks!
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a perfect ending spot..


and you should work on the other story, right?
person Jen618
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so completely hilarious! OMG. Rattling off positions like that. Very, very funny. I kind of want her to totally give in to him, but part of me enjoys her snarkiness.
person Sharkoon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue, I totally love this story. Severus being so determined and pure in his persuasion of Hermione should be heart-rending not only fo me but for Hermione too. I'd like to see her coming to terms with it. Oh, and on a tiny tiny side note: Your lemons are really ... good ... as usual (but I didn't expect anything less from you). :)
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it please update asap.!!!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter, (think I need to get that book lol), can't wait to see what is next
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. You have the most unbearable cliff hangers!