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by Ms_Figg

person Ms_Figg
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah girl. It's not writer's block. I just had my head into other stories. But as you see I put up a chapter today and will probably do one or two more. Sometimes when I'm working on more than one story, one will catch my attention more than another. This story is just a little light-hearted romp and exploration. Sev as a boy-toy . . . or an older woman's fantasy. But it won't be abandoned. I don't abandon stories, or well I haven't to date. ***
person gowvan
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, it's back.
Love it. Love it!
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wohoo! at last! another chapter! please continue. thank you
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Shamanda
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh joy! What fortuitous circumstances are these! There's an update by the next time I check! *swoons at chapter* OH! But as usual this only wants me to read more! I can't let it rest until I see "The End", please update again soon!
person snape7
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I'm soooooo glad that you are finally updating this ^^ awesome <3
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Go snape! :D
person Shamanda
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How long has it been? It seems like ages... I was really enjoying this story. I know it's very different from your usual stuff, but it was excellent. Look at me, using past tense, when what I really want is for you to continue.

Come on, you remember, Hermione just found out about Snape moonlighting as the "Half Blood Prince"... she's appalled that he's using untested potion methods, but being Hermione, we know she's curious deep down. Thirsty for knowledge, as always.

I've read all of your stories, and it seems pretty obvious that she would interrogate him, and that he would defend himself, perhaps she'd test his method's, become interested, make an arrangement of some sort. All purely business from her point of view, after all, no silly adolescent infatuation would stop her from making a potion's breakthrough. And of course Snape is all the while deviously scheming on how to get her into bed again... I don't know how it will actually go, but I'd imagine something along those lines.

But don't you see? A shady plot outline isn't good enough! I need you to put it into words! I want to see the intricacies of their thought processes, and watch them go through the motions. You must update! I realize you weren't planning on making this a fully-fledged story, but how often do you say that in the beginning? And how many stories have grown into 80 + chapter long epics?

Please, defeat this writers block that seems to have stricken you. This story is different, yes. It's unusual, yes. It's unfamiliar, yes. But that's what make's it so special! It's so new for you! I want to see a Miss Figg story where Hermione has social dominance, if not sexual.

UPDATE!!!!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so odd seeing Severus and Hermione's roles switched around, but as you've probably heard a thousand times before- it's refreshing. I really liked this chapter and how Severus showed his Slytherin colors once again. Manipulative little bastard =) But he is so smart.

schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update! Such an exciting and thrilling chapter too. I LOVE this story. :)