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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Its good to have you back, I was seriously going through some withdrawals. I hope that you get better soon and stop hurting. I have serious arthritis and know how hard it is to write when your in pain. I look forward to more of your wonderful work.

Red Writing Hood

terribly sorry about the 'pincushion for a student nurse' bit. im a student pharmacist, and half the time us health students fuck things up because were so horribly nervous. i hope home treatment goes well and your muse comes to an understanding with what youre on the meds for and the meds themselves. it took my muse several months to come to grips with the effects of the first EFFECTIVE med; she had been mute or dead prior. Shes got ADD way past what ritalin can treat and insufferably demanding to boot, but she speaks. :D

otherwise, im thrilled to see you update Alternate Universe, its one of my favorites out of all the lovely Hermione/Severus fic you have written. i love the direction you took this chapter with, and i think youve created an excellent setup for some really intense exchange between the two, both verbally, physically, and emotionally, even before they finish the brewing and have sex!! i have every confidence you can make the next several chapters blazingly intense and have all parties fully clothed and your audience beg for more. good luck, and, as always, am eagerly awaiting whatever you have next.

I'm sorry to hear about your health problems and do hope you'll fully recover soon.

Bearing that in mind I'm particularly thankful for this chapter.
The exchanges between Herminoe and Severus are so funny, I'm constantly smiling.
At the same time, Severus is so sweet in his sincere, persistent persuasion. For instance when he could'nt stop grinning at the prospect of moving in with Hermione or when he told her:

this fic is so great. i'm always alughing or smiling when i read this. hermione's aversion to men and severus's unabashed desire and manipulation of hermione are so entertaing. and its all delivered in such a humorous package. its always a treat to see a new chapter posted.
-crissy

An Excellent chapter, of course! ^___^

Agh, does not sound like you had a fun week at all. Take as much time as you need, we'll all still be here. ^__^

Im glad that you are feeling better... I was wondering what happened to my favorite author! lol love the update! Keep it up!

~Anya

Welcome back! I hope you feel better, I missed your writing while you were gone.
Take it easy.

Sorry to hear you're not well! Hope all improves for you soon. Thank you so much for puttingup another chapter. Big hugs. J

I'm glad that your health has improved. The newest chapter was an unexpected bonus to my afternoon, much obliged.