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by Ms_Figg

person anonymous
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG HOW DO YOU JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT?!?!?!?! OH MY GODDDSS!!! I swear this is crack. Pure crack.

Keep up the great work!!!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hermione is soo mean in this fic. i love that. and the house elves keeping their masters' secrets even from himself made me laugh outloud. i loved it. admittedly i skipped through a lot of the description of hermiones rape. that was brutal. i'm happy to read new chapters. will severus renew his pursuit of hermione before he finishes his potions?
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus! What a hero! I can't believe how creative he was with the writing spell on Lucius forehead. I was worried that you were going to have him kill Lucius and have the rose be a clue to Hermione that his soul was fragmented. I'm glad he remains whole though. Hermione shouldn't kill him! Severus is why she feels free for the first time in years! She should reward him winkwink*.
Fabulous story- as usual!
Can't wait till the next chapter!
Harley
person Melissa
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...I'm a bit befuddled as to the meaning of her last remark... unless she was just being sarcastic.

Lucius really got his, and Severus certainly proved his worth. Gotta love the Media, eh? Upstanding philanthropist... I'm surprised he managed to wiggle out of all charges with the...

No, no I'm not. The Ministry of Magic is never portrayed as being efficient.

What was I saying? Oh yes, brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next, and I love how the house elves are keeping his 'secret'. I'd like to think it's their little way of getting him back for his mistreatment. They are fairly intelligent creatures, and they certainly understand the situation. I may be off the mark, but it makes me happy. In my mind it balances things out just a little more.

These updates are so frequent! Yay! (I
person alm1067
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So many updates in such little time, I am so happy:) Thanks so much, and more PLEASE!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that Professor Granger can get Severus to remove the word on Lucius' forhead. Even though a crime was committed, he doesn't deserve to live the rest of his life with a permanent reminder of it. It should also be up to Hermione to actually press charges against him for the crime. As for Severus he should confess and have to become a servant to Lucius over the summer months as punishment for the attack. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heidi: lololol. You're joking right? :::snicker::: like any of that would EVER happen. Lucius is lucky he's not dead. Not loving the blonde one in this fic at all.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! What an update! Hmm, looks like Severus has himself in quite the predicament now. hehe loved it!
person Jullsy
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see that you are beck in force. You finished Twice bitten and you have already 3 chapters full of emotions in this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! (as always) poor Hermione, having to deal with a crying Severus. lol!