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I like it. Please update soon.

*lets out a fangirl squeel*

You updated! Yay! I really love this story, everything about it, what more can I say other than I can't wait to read more?

Albus's treatmeant of Hermione is a little, saddening. I can see where he's coming from, but it's still a bit depressing to know the one person who's supposed to care the most, and look out for her... has given up.

Well, perhaps not given up exactly, but Severus's passion for her well being is something Hermione's been sorely lacking. I wonder if he'll work up the courage to ask her about her past with Lucius? He probably won't think it's any of his business, but you've always written him as a bit of a volatile personality.

Now he's a Gryffindor, that can only exasborate the situation... I'm sure something will slip out. How would he react when he finds out Lucius's has done this before? Has rituralisticall raped Hermione, while she was at Hogwarts, and nothing was ever done.

I can't wait to see what he does! An avenging angel. A hot, dark, passionate, 18 year old avenging angel. Can it get much better than that? I've always had a rather delicate sense of justice. I personally have a bit of a mean streak when I feel I've been wronged... that's why this is all so pefect. I'm happy to have my scale-balancing phantom in this plot. Go Severus!

lol, "what more can I say" indeed. I'm done!

Another great chapter. I hope that Severus is very careful in trying to go after Lucius Malfoy. He should just leave it and let Professor Granger take care of it. I look forward to reading more soon.

He's got him! He's got him! He's obviously not going to kill him, or he would have done that already, unless he plans play with him first. Torture is in store for the blonde haired devil, either way, though what kind? I'm terribly anxious to know, I'm sure you'll make it very memorable. And satisfying.

Hopefully the resolution of this will turn him back into his old self. As much as I love the older, snarkier Snape, I'm also fond of the bright, young Severus you've created. He may be a bit more mature, seeing as this was a very harsh push into the injustice of reality, but still.

You update so frequently, I love you for that. Great chapter, can't wait for the next.

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Oh Wow! I was a little dubious about this at first... but my Gryffindor bravery won and I clicked the link, and I'm pleasantly surprised!

I love how all the roles are reversed, Lilly exchanged for James; Lilly and the female marauders; Snape being the brains of the operation. I wonder, is Lucius more of a Lucida? and Narcissa a Narcissus? Or is it only a Hermione-Snape swap?

I think every student has a crush on at least one teacher at some point in their academic career - though Snape may have bitten off more than he can chew with his!

10/10

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