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by Extraho

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I do love this story and hope to read more.
person Jan
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Remus is still a good guy! I'm so Happy ^_^
ARGH!!! Dumblefuck has got to fucking GO!!! They 'need' to freaking KILL him in the most gruesome of ways!!!!!!

Please update chapter 28 soon.

Jan
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I still don't like it, but I can kinda understand it better now. I liked the healing part. Harry was angry, is still angry; they hurt his pack and they hurt his family. Harry is the leader, THE Alpha; he understands his role in the pack and helped Remus heal despite what happened, and also allowed him back intot he pack with restrictions. He is a good leader, a good Alpha Lord. Remus did wrong, and he was punished. Remus has explained himself, and is now being given certain priviledges back. Restricted, of course. I mean, he hurt his pack. I wouldn't welcome him back with open arms either. But Harry did heal him, and did allow him back. That's huge. I guess he's going to get his mate's bonding rings back, eh? I don't know whether to say 'Poor Dumbledore' or 'Dumbarse bastard...'. I'm leaning toward the second one...

I also noticed several spelling mistakes throughout this chapter. I don't want to be mean about it, just wanted to bring it to your attention. ~dpa06~
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too Short! I want more! More!!

I'm so glad Remus didn't betray Harry on purpose

Update Soon!
person Rokkis
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah *pout* and I was looking forward to a delicious torture scene.. *heaves frustrated sigh*
But am hoping the fact that Dumbles stole those rings will be enough to drag him in front of the Wizengamot, after all there can't be any legal reason why the headmaster of the school needs those rings?

Cheers!

Please please update sooner! Almost thought you had abandoned the story:(
person mls1971
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!! can't wait to read what happens next!!!!!! hope you update soon!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!
person chineseartist
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it. only wish there was more of it, but i'm sure you're adding as fast as you can or when the mood strikes you. good luck with the rest of the fic.
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo! Yeah!! I can't wait for fenrir to make an entrance! Longer chappies please!!!
person Kitsuko
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Post :) please?
i really love your story and i hope that Fenrir and their kids will be fine
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah :D I love the new chapter. I'm happy you decided to make Remus a good guy. I can't wait for the next update.
Hope for more soon.