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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting very interesting!! Looking forward to the order of the fried chicken and co getting their asses kicked!!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story please update soon. i cant wait to read more
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello I love father Harry he is so viril very good fic Bye
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I have to ask when you plan on updating again. I hope it is soon though.
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am now going to sound like a little fan girl... OMGGGGG!!!!!!!!! ...done. I love your story. I read all 28 chapters in one day and cannot wait for more. I only have one question to ask, and I mean no offense to your beta if you have one, but do you have one? While I love your story to death, there are multiple little typos that drive me nuts-grammar nerd that I am. The bad thing is, the majority of them make serious or sexy scenes humorous. If you do not have a beta and would like one, I am willing to do it for you. I know people read over there own stuff and see nothing wrong, but that's because your mind assumes the correct thing is there even if it's not(no offense if you already knew this).
Everything said above is meant purely constructively, I do not mean to flame in any way; if it is taken that way, I apologize.
I look forward very much to your next update.
nekoyoka
nekoyoka@aim.com
Everything said above is meant purely constructively, I do not mean to flame in any way; if it is taken that way, I apologize.
I look forward very much to your next update.
nekoyoka
nekoyoka@aim.com
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story! Please do ignore any one saying its rubish and update soon! 100000/10 for the story, I've never liked a DomHarry, always a SubHarry as no one could write a DomHarry in my oppion to what I was looking for but you've done it ^-^ all I have to say is great story, update soon and I hope that Harry gets the bonding rings back from Dumbles soon! I don't know how the alerts thing works on this site so please e-mail me when ever there is new chapters up! my e-mail is corsula@hotmail.com
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, It's stopped. I moved from your fanfiction story to this one because it was more updated now I got nothin to read please update soon...
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story hope for more chapters soon
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww pls update soon
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi this is lilybean and i love your story its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good