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by Extraho

schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start and premiss, I'm curious where you're going with this and look forward to the next update.
person Madhater
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this is nice and interesting cant wait to read more. ^_^
person Bastian
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have never read anything quite like this before. I dont really like Belatrix but I might like her in this story if you make her likable. I am interested and I hope you update again soon.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it,
i hope you can update soon.
person jenv
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the rest
person In2Deep
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well... this is an intresting twist! dont think that i have ever seen a LM father of HP or in this case LML... hope to see an up-date soon!
person Ambre
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story please update soon.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is promising,please update soon
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! I think that I am already in love with this. Never read one with this kind of background for Harry and can't wait to find out what is next.